since you wanna know what we thought...
i would say that it was lacking details
but it really had a huge mental impact on me so keep writing...
i love it when you stop to the good parts...
Author's response
You know what? I actually agree with you! I think I'm a decent writer but I'm only a beginner so, I'm not that good and alot of the time I don't know what details to put in... lol.
But anyway, thanks for the review! =)