(#) Secca 2008-04-18
I really enjoy your writing. Your abrupt scene changes can be a bit disconcerting, but other than that it's really good. I really like how you have expanded on Ollivander's character. Seeing how he is at most an ancillary character, it is quite interesting to see your interpretation of the man. I can't wait for the next update, you've done a great job in keeping my interest in this story.