Review for Emerald Blaze

Emerald Blaze

(#) Fission25 2008-04-19

Great Story!

I've always thought Harry had such a kind and loving heart that he could actually support a sort of Harem. I hope that what's your going for.

It's nice to see a more in-character approach with his kindness. At times it seems so many loose track of that and just make him into an ass.

I hope we have some smut in the coming chapters, but no need to hurry it too much. I've enjoyed seeing another story that has a reason and development for the smut.

Also, seeing the thoughts and feelings of the girls feelings change for Harry might make it interesting and more believable.

Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.

Fission