Great story. I hope to see more from you. I love the way you told things, you seem like a master at first person, (I suck at the point of view)
Author's response
Thank you very much! ^_^ I like the first person point of view because it seems very intimate; truth be told, I have the same trouble with third person point of view that you have with first person. ^^;
Again, thank you for reviewing! I'll check up on what you're writing as well!