I like it. the only potential problem I can see is geting the troops names mixed up. mabey you could put a list of their names and a on sentence descrioption of them a the start of the next chapter so we can copy it to notepad or something.
Your Lord and Master
~Zombie Wolf
Author's response
heh heh, dude you sent me 3 same reviews man. I know of the problem. I will probably put their names on top of each chapter that they show up on. It gave me a few headaches writing chap.5