Review for The Return of the Boy Who Lived

The Return of the Boy Who Lived

(#) DrT 2008-04-21

It was hardly a bad action scene -- better a little less detail than a blow-by-blow overly-detailed sequence that is so boring none of it seems to matter

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Author's response

Thanks for your feedback, I was concerned because I really don't have a lot of experience writing action scenes; and it didn't seem to flow the way I wanted it to.

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