Hi, Red,
I'm enjoying where you take this. I don't think you owe any apologies for the chapter.
I do, however, have one nitpick: right after you talked about stuff from the room disappearing, you had Hermione ask for some paper for a list. Surely she has parchment and quill on her at all times....
I'm glad Snape's dead. Too bad he was so noble; he doesn't deserve to be remembered as a hero. :P
I'm looking forward to what comes next.
Author's response
Thanks; and you are right about the paper thing; I meant to include a comment from Hermione saying that she'd leave the paper in the room, so nobody could find it but them.
I actually wasn't planning on killing Snape so early; but, it just happened.
I'm just trying to make things different from every other re-do story; and; honestly, I was tired of Snape as a character. There really wasn't that many places to take the character that haven't been done to death.
Thanks again for your feedback
red