I think it must be like writing sex scenes...all keeping track of elbows and knees and stuff. So my hat's off to you, nobody wound up on the wrong side of the room with the reader going 'wait, wasn't he here???'.
Still love this point of view, and really enjoying smart, confident Neville.
Thanks for the more!
Author's response
Actually; I find writing sex scenes easier, maybe because I like doing that far more than I like fighting GRIN
Thanks for the feedback
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