Review for Battered Hearts

Battered Hearts

(#) Alorkin 2008-04-21

Paul is trying to understand his newfound difficulties. It's too bad his doctor is unfamiliar with possession by malevolent spirits.

Kalaeo and Lanikai are wonder-workers. They recognize the problem, and take the actions to correct it. Having lived through the death first, our unborn son, and then three weeks later my wife, I understand better than most, how that affects a person. I can see Hermione's uncertainty when Harry asked her to move in with him and the boys.

In typical Hermione fashion, she overreacted. She has her reasons and concerns, but her reaction was hurtful to Harry and the boys. Fortunately for her, Harry is the understanding type.


A/N: Antabuse is no longer prescribed here in the US.(to the best of my knowledge) It's side effects are considered to severe to be safe. The physical rejection of the alcohol and the long-lasting and completely overwhelming nausea is considered to be worse than the alcohol. (I had a shipmate on the America in the early 80's who was on it. After a while he decided to stop taking it, despite that the Corpsmen were required to administer each dose. He'd just palm the pill, or spit it out when the doc wasn't looking. He died in 83 walking across the road, stupid as a new Ensign, and got hit by a drunk driver.)

Don't just transfer your music to MMP-3. Electronic storage is the easiest to destroy. Have the records digitally corrected and burned onto CD. That way, you'll have a permanent copy. If you can, store the originals in soft paper in a cool dry container. Those originals are worth a great deal, not only in coinage but in the music itself. Many of the singers are no longer alive, and it would be a horrible waste to get rid of something that cannot be replaced.

As before, I eagerly await the next chapter of 'Battered Hearts'. Alorkin

Author's response

Wow! What a review, some wonderful insights here. Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

It's too bad his doctor is unfamiliar with possession by malevolent spirits.

What's important here is the there is a NHS database that an enterprising DMLE probie can tap into. . .

Kalaeo and Lanikai are wonder-workers.

We'll see more of them later.

In typical Hermione fashion, she overreacted.

Imagine "Hermioneness mixed with second trimester hormones - stand back!

Antabuse is no longer prescribed here in the US

Good point.

Don't just transfer your music to MMP-3.

I'll be sure to do just that!

Thank you again!

I mean I'll be sure to transfer the files to a CD or two or three. . .

Loved "Harry Loves You," BTW.