'Twas an adequate action scene for the style of story (the only time I really want a "blow by blow" description is with good porn ;) ).
That was an interesting way of dealing with both Quirrelmort and Snape and 'twill be quite interesting to see how things evolve now and how much Dumbles tells them for the nonce. Menawhile, I'm enjoying this version of Neville and I like what he's doing for both Harry and Hermione.
Author's response
Thanks for your feedback, and I'm having a lot of fun with this version of Neville as well.
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