Review for A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela

A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela

(#) thedon1023 2008-04-24

it would be easier if Harry learned to turn himself invisible like Dumbledoor does and instead of willing his entire body invisible he would just will his wings invisible. he could probably work somethin out with runes that allows for him to keep his wings hidden even when not consciously trying to hide em like if he was sleeping or knocked out somehow but at the sametime allows for him to show the wings when he wants to. iono just a thought.anyways please update soon

-The Don