I'm really impressed with the way you handle the action, and I hope the following battles will have more intricate strategies, brilliant tactics... and the gritty realism of war.
Anyway, I'm fond of Commander Athy (for Athena)... but if Harry was feeling cute, I'd think Commander Acky would be nice. ACC-07, "Accy".
And because I'm a sadistic bastard, the 2nd in command would be "Lackey".
And you just KNOW that the first insane clone's name would be "Loony". or maybe Luna :))
Anyways. Keep it up! I would like to think the female Jedi, if not an Original Character, would be everyone's favorite dual-wielding twi'lek. Aayla Secura... but wait, how old would she be in this timeline? It must be nice if it was her, though. You could make her a total n00b at commanding and she'll pick up battle tactics from Harry...
Because as far as I know there was no explanation why she kicks ass while commanding the Grand Army in that stupid Jungle planet. (what was the name of that again... Mygeeto? I forget)
Author's response
lol, still thinking of the names at the moment. I want them to be original and is a mix between both SW and Earthling names. If you study military strategies, you'll recognize the tactics Harry will use next chap ;D. I will use Aalya Secura. She's a Padawan right now in the time. I've tweeked it so she can be the same age as Harry(14). Her master will be with her searching for Harry. She didn't get her ass kicked, she just got shot in the back of the Head by the clones because they were ordered to. The planet name is Felucia, it will come up as well in battle. Hope these help you.