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Nice chapter.

Liked the holocron idea for Force training. That should really get the attention of the Jedi.

I do wonder if learning about the force has helped his magic at all.

Don't think you should go with the female force idea, seems to much like a humor fic idea or crack fic. It would take away from the seriousness of the fic by taking it so far from canon info and interpretations about the Force.

The battle was nice. As much fun as it is to surprise Harry I do find it odd that the Kamino's keep dropping new equipment off on him right before a major battle. As commander he should have some say in what equipment is issued to his Army.

Also find it weird that this is the second time that reinforcements(that Harry didn't know about) are thrown in after the battle starts. Just how much are the Kamino's keeping from Harry.
As the old saying goes, amateurs talk tactics, professionals talk logistics. Harry should show more interest in what resources are available for his Army.

As nice as it was to see the Pirates get kicked I am surprised that they actually attacked instead of ran. Most likely the only reason they were in on this attack is they were promised an easy target. The moment warships showed up they should have started having second thoughts.

Thanks for the clone guide. The ones that are really confusing are the CC Clone captains, their are just so many with the same CC-### and you can't exactly use physical identifiers since they all look alike and wear armor.

More soon please.