Review for Oaths of Fantasy

Oaths of Fantasy

(#) NotACat 2008-04-28

Still having issues with tense: you really need someone to proof-read for you.

More seriously: "On a quim" is really not what you meant to write, trust me.

"On a whim" is the appropriate phrase: please look up the word you used in error and don't use it again unless you really mean it...

Author's response

Yes that is supposed to be whim... I wonder if I can to rate the chapter nc17 cause of that typo.. (Sweat drops)