(#) Vanir 2008-04-28
I agree with NotACat, and move that it's a great idea, to act on a quim, but that has to be done in a smuttier fic, and not by a 11-year old.
The prophecy was great. As a semi-professional mythologist, i note that it's a better "classical" prophecy than Rowlings, and again, your flowing prose is beautiful but you really do need someone to Beta for you.
On the possible intricacies of bondings and such, I always defer to the brilliant DrT, but you seem to have a different plan in place.
Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
Vanir
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Really I thought it might be too long. Why do you think so.
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