Review for My Famous Life

My Famous Life

(#) Moonshyne 2008-05-03

Hi there disturbedangel,

I have mixed feelings about her being with Bob. In My Foster Life they were so in love, but then she betrayed him not once, or twice but three times. He was hurt but it was great when they finally got together. Then she realizes she missed Gerard and slept with him and then made out with Mikey. Poor Bob. And since then she's been with Gee and Frank though that meant nothing. Now she doesn't like Gee again we knew what happened last time she didn't like Gee.

At first I was ecstatic over the kiss and the last line about being mature and knowing what they wanted gives me hope.

Besides my rant this is a great story and will continue to read it to see what happens. Great job!!

Author's response

wow!
ur cool!
haha
yea i'm actuallly sorry about the weird story plot...
hmmm...
i think i should like finish this story soon then...
but thanks :D


xx