As another reviewer said, it's always great to see Scott portrayed as human and not just a walking talking arse. I love the beginning, it really sets up Scott's emotions and how he's seeing the world since Jean's death. However, I too feel that with a bit more detail to thicken the piece that it could be even stronger than it already is. This is just my opinion of course, but it does feel like something is missing. Hope you write some more Scott pieces, you capture him well.