(#) Secca 2008-05-06
Hey, this story has wonderful potential. The cliches make it the story it is and they aren't over done. At this point it is hard to do a re-do fic void of cliches. I agree with the others on supporting Sirius and choosing Tonks or Fleur over others, preferably Tonks in my opinion. But I hope you are willing to commit to this story as it, indeed, has tremendous potential if you are willing to put the effort into writing it.