That was a great story and i love the way you got rid of tom i do not think i have ever seen it done that way before great job.Overall i would give this story a 9 out of 10 excellent job.I look forward to reading many more stories from you in the future hopefully you have lots of new story ideas floating around in your headkeep up the graet work.
P.S. I loved it when daphne called pansy parkinslut awesome!!!