Normally I'm not this critical. I see bad fic, I ignore it an move on. But this is the third piece of drivel I've read in the last half hour. I work hard on my writing. It takes hours, sometimes days to get the right words in the right order to tell a story.
And when I see this kind of hurried, nonsensical, over-regurgitated swill being passed off as a writer's best efforts, I'm offended.
'Harry Potter and the New Powers' my ass. There's nothing new here.
Author's response
I'm sorry you think that. In my defense, this is my first time writing fanfiction and it's not easy! Also, it's not hurried - things will make more sense later on, but I'm trying to establish the story.
Thank you for your review.
Also, I've been trying my best to ignore it, but I can't help myself anymore. You were quite rude, you know! Perhaps you should be encouraging new authors, not being mean!
After you talked about your stories, I looked at them. You know what? They're not very good either! I just started writing! If you claim to work so hard on your stories and they're still so average, why are you going around being rude to new authors?!
I really hope you reconsider your behavior and apologize, its really very uncalled for. I'm also sorry, in case I offended you, but your review made me very mad!