Ohh Don't Let Bob Die! I Love Bob=)
I Donno,I No This Is Your Story And All But You Kept Typing Alyssa After She Disappeared,Don't You Mean Aileen? It Just Confused Me.
Ohh You Could Like Make Frank Die At the Very End For Good Causes And Thats Another Reason Why Frank Is Down There,Or Something ALong The Lines.
Omg! I'm Telling You How To Write Your Own Story.Sorry Got Carried Away And Now Im Blabbering On.
Ohh War!!!! Next Chapter Please!
Author's response
Thanks so much for telling me about that mistake! I've fixed it now ;) I get mixed up with those two names a lot haha
No comment about Bob... and thanks for the idea what the plot of the story is already written ;)
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