FicWad

Well the story seems okay for a firts time writer,so I'll be gentle. now efore you post your story read it carefully or have a friend check it. now as for one you assumed that evryone knew that harry was borrowing merlins staff. you can't assume and you nedd a little more detail. what happened to his relitaves, did the ministry find out about that surge of power. harrys wand may have tracking charms on it but it didn't have anthing to do with prophecy. don't put ron and hermione in a reationship leave them as business partners. be oriinal and don't let harry fall into the habit of listening to dumbledore at all. and use harrys position to remove dumbles from hogwars and have one of isown take the postion and get rid of snape. but otherwise have him change schools. and last harry needs training so let him leave to get it without dumbles interference and make harry a citizen of whatever country he goes to school in if he does change schools. these are just suggstions so if you get stuck take a suggestion from the reviews that you get and take your time, you have to crawl before you walk.