i don't understand the people who read fics that they dont like and then flame the author. if you dont like it, DON'T READ IT! Just because you don't like it doesn't mean others will feel the same. is the plot cliche, perhaps but does that mean no one should ever agan try their hand at writing a story just because it's been done before? that's ignorant. i for one liked the story so far. it's the author's first story; is anyone's first attempt at ANYTHING perfect? doubtful. i applaud the author for trying because i for one am content to be a "lurker":) keep going, keep writing and just delete the flamers to avoid getting burned;)