Slashslut, not all criticisms are flames. It is the author's first story but how does he (or she?) know what to improve without people reading it and expressing their opinions?
Author's response
Please let me say that I don't mind constructive critisism! If you don't like something I'm doing, then let me know so that I can try to do better. But please don't just be mean and rude and flame! I don't think that's too much to ask for.
Anyway, Im glad that so many of you are liking this story! I've got soooo many ideas! Thanks for the reviews!