OK, I like the ending, however, I think that perhaps I might have skipped over a bit or you didn't take the opportunity to properly put Tonks in her place. Last I remember was a conversation between her and her mum about consequences for her actions. I think that it should have been a bit more Harsh. Secondly, the bit between Neville and Pansy, while good could have been better if you had put forth a bit more effort in writing a proper interaction between her and Tom in regards to the message that she delivered.
Maybe I'm just a bit upset because it's over and that it could have been longer. I believe that when writing a book about the suffering of others that you go to great detail to describe it. I do like it. I will add it to my favorites on FFN and continue to read and expect great things from you.
Geovanni Luciano