Sorry I too have to agree with lycus, Harry never burst into tears, speically over not getting a weapon, maybe at seeing his parents maybe, but not getting a weapon.
But from that great chapter, I love what happened to the weapons to make new sword for Harry. I like what the three potions did, very nice.
Shame about the Phoenix eggs.
Author's response
I wanted to illustrate that the chamber was full of love! Even getting the weapon, it is full of many memories and generations of Potter history. It seems natural that all that family love would make Harry very emotional!
But thank you for the constructive critisism. It's nice to see it without people being mean and flaming! I promise that Harry won't cry nearly as much, if at all!