(#) lycus 2008-05-12
That was a great chapter, and I hope that you update soon. but I really hope that you skip some of the training so that you get to the story quicker. and as for the girls you might as well make it a harry/harem story and as for the girls angelina and alicia are with the weasleys so how about hermione/fluer/tonks/katie bell and padma patil or su li. and you've already shown that harry and hermione had a relationship by harry giving her her own owl and thinking of her first, and last how far in the future did harry come back from?