(#) koppe 2008-05-12
Great start, please update soon!
One thing though, surely harry is only 10 -- not 11 -- year and some when he visit Gringotts... especially since he trains until his (11th?) birthday.
Part of me hope Harry will strike-up a friendship with Hermione -- and perhaps make her less bookish and bossy -- and maybe make Slytherin less hostile to "Mudblood" (although, I can't really see your story going that way so far).
Harry does seem a bit dark -- nearly evil, and surely egotistical and callous (not sure I like him much ;-)... He also seems a bit too well-adjusted to all the quirks of the Wizarding-world.
Hope he'll do something creative against his uncle with his Grunnings stock.
Keep up the good work, and update soon (yes, I know there are more chapters up already).