(#) Felur 2008-05-13
I am sorry, but this story is mediocre at best. I would only enjoy it in that case, if your fic was a parody. You use almost all cliches characteristic of the independent!Harry's stories and do not really add anything original.
I understand, that you are upset, but consider, that many (about every third!) comments repeat my opinion. May be we are at least partly right...
Finally it is not a flame. I think, that a negative feedback can also very helpful especially for a novice author.