(#) lycus 2008-05-14
Thank you for giving harry some backbone and stopping the waterworks. the only thing about the chapter that bothered me was the time spell and harrys' height he's just too tall you mabe him 6'7 it would have been more believable if haeer was 6'1 or 6'2 as the most. but anyway you are getting better with your writing so keep up the good work. and one last thing hermione betraying harry just doesn't feel right are you sure she wasn't influenced by an outside force.