Review for Technomancer - The light path

Technomancer - The light path

(#) AnnF 2008-05-14

Summary typo: receives, and Harry


Please capitalize names.

Author's response

Can't believe I missed those. I'm more amazed that's all there is! =o

ca·pered, ca·per·ing, ca·pers
To leap or frisk about; frolic

Thanks for the helpfull critique =), errors will be fixed when my owner lets me out of my cage to play with the other Chimpanzees.