I haven't finished it yet, but so far it's really interesting. A couple of criticisms though. When Emma wakes up after being randomly attacked by a vampire she should be more scared and not so accepting. Emma and Spencer's relationship develops a bit too quickly and not all vampires should be so lustful for sex. Blood yes, sex no. Also after Emma loses her virginity wouldn't Pete not want her anymore? Once he gets a whiff of her anyway. Unless he's only going to do it to spite Spence? Lol well I'll read on and find out, but good work Andrea.