Review for Harry Potter and the New Powers

Harry Potter and the New Powers

(#) dfge 2008-05-23

One question before the rest of the review, what category is this story?

One thing that is annoying, is that character development is non existent. No seriously, the new characters just seem to be puppets which are held by string and they show almost no emotion. As soon as we see the Daviss, their first reaction is to attack now, ask questions later. Why don't they just try to lure him into a false sense of safety and capture, poison him etc.?