Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) alchemist1806 2008-05-23

Hmmm...nice story as a whole. Some of the desciptions were lacking I thought but I enjoyed the story nonetheless.

I was also a bit disappointed with Dumbledore's end which was anticlimatic but I guess that in itself would have been just punishment for the character.

To end, 12 children for Harry and Daphne? you perv (/grin/)