Hey I thought the ideal for this story and the first chapter were good but Man I got to tell ya, that this second chapter just blows me away! Love the trunk and letter from his mum as well as portrait from sparda. Although I wished you had gone into this training a little bit more. Also I dont think he should of told Mcgonagall...even with that oath. Also why didnt he blow up or get mad when he found out she was his godmother and she didnt try to keep him or anything.