One of the worst stories I've read on this website-and there are A LOT of crap stories on this website.
Author's response
I know i know it's crap everyone hates it. I guess i wasn't to sure on the direction i wanted the story to go and it sucks hard. I questioned weather i should post it and i did big mistake. but thank you for telling me and not just giving a bad review. If you don't mind would you read some of my other stories and tell me what you think. I don't want to keep posting crap. I want people to read and like what i write. Thank you!