Oh, my, I wonder if Dumbles realizes just who and what he's brought together? You've got the shadow of a Dark Lord who wants power and you've forcibly brought in his supposed nemesis in such a way that the boy wants nothing to do with you and yours and now they're talking. ALbus, you've mucked this one up badly.
I did like the discussion 'tween Harry & Tom and I wonder if what Harry's said will give him pause to think?
On the downside, there were some typos, such as "wreak" instead of "wreck", that need fixing. It is, though, an excellent read.