First loved how you worked in the marvel Villian of the week(Spymaster), with Harry making his mark the muggle way, thanks to Steve !
Also using Madame Webb is also a great Chice yet i think you need to link more of the Marvel characters to distant magical relatives!
Finally I really love this New Trio and if you could get away with a trio coupling Padma, Hermione and Harry would make a powerful combo!
dennisud
P.S. Will Magneto, the X-man and Apokalypse make a cameo or three?
;-)
Author's response
- As a Gunny once told me, go for soft tissue or joints and you'll focus their mind...
- I needed a seer who wasn't really all that connected to any primary continuity, Madame Webb was the best (only?) choice.
- They will date (I'm thinking starting in 5th year) each other and others, but nothing exclusive.
- No, because Erik, Nate or Paccy would kick tommy's ass so throughly that the story would be over.