I see you worked around Harry's mistake of showing his new form to his relatives by just having Snape test for the truth and not actually view the memory. Why the additional horcruxes? Wasn't the original seven enough? Will Snape turn into an ally as he figures out Harry's childhood or will Harry wipe his ass first? I vote of a all out duel/physical fight were Harry wins and by doing so wins Snape's approval and support.(Don't think I've seen this done.)