Review for The Return of the Boy Who Lived

The Return of the Boy Who Lived

(#) cloneserpents 2008-06-10

It’s refreshing to see Dumbledore being more proactive in his handling of Harry.

Also, I liked that Neville revealed the truth to Harry and Hermione. And the reasons for not telling Ron are very solid – and I’m not just saying that because I don’t like his character. Well, actually, one of the reasons I don’t like Ron is the same reason they don’t tell him the truth about Neville.

Author's response

Thanks, I'm trying to show an Albus who can learn from his mistakes, and be willing to work with Harry and Neville, instead of manipulating them.


by the way, have you been checking out my "Harry Potter and the Hogwarts Harem" that I started posting yesterday? I figured you would enjoy it, considering how much fun you have with Hermione and Luna in your Cracked Mirror story.