oh man i loved this chapter! i know i've said it a few thousand times but your writing is so realistic. you could really feel everything viola felt, from fear to anxiety to irritation and back to fear again and all the little feelings there in between.. it's like magic lol, you should start writing happy stories and make depressed people read them. you'd have the cure for teenage angst in your hands!
although... i changed my mind, don't write happy gooey stories. i like the drama and the tragedy.
Author's response
Oh I can't write happy stories, I tried that once but ended up killing the charechters. I just can't, I'm a morbid human being and tragedy is my fun.