Review for Awake

Awake

(#) Smooshy 2008-06-18

OMG!!! My brain is scurrying with absolutely no fucking clue what you're doing. Yeesh, I could say it's Bob at the door, or Mikey or Ray, but then that would be cheating wouldn't it. You absolutely must write the next chapter and FAST! Because Smooshy can only take so much. Beautiful phrasing through out all of it, and I am now more intrugued then ever to know about her and Frank's deal. I have many ideas but I'm keeping them under lock and key. I love love love it!

xoxo Smooshy

Author's response

hahahaa!!!
My brain is scurrying with uncertainty too!!

Cheers
Kat