Well, I came across this fic, because you mention it in a thread in the forum, and thought I'd drop by, read, and give my feedback. Because, I don't really roam near the Horror section, much. I'm more of a fan fiction gal, myself. But, I'm up for any Original fiction as well. :]
But, when I finished this, I was not disappointed. :]
It was really good. A little short, but hey, a little goes a long way, right? Right.
I do enjoy the plot you have here. I like where this is going. And I also like Theta. She has spunk and she seems realistic. :]
Alrighty then, I'm off to read the next chappy!