Not bad.
Bill reminds me so much of my friend, it's funny.
LOL
It might help though, if you use capitals where they need to be, like at the start of sentences and for "I" and such.
But, LOL, you said boobies.
I haven't said that in years. =P
Ah, who am I to judge. Whatever floats your boat.
More when you can. =]
Stefi
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