(#) BJH 2008-06-23
You wanna know what I really like about htis story?
You've taken a premise that would give you an amusing little voyeauristic PWP story and actually put some significant depth to it.
Harry didn't just fall into Marrietta's head and go along for the ride, he learned something of the depth of human emotions.
Harry didn't just realize Hermione was hot and try to nail her, he is drawn to her for herself as well as her body and wants more than just PWP.
Angelina does more than just snog Harry for his help, she feels something for him and is torn between giving him what he wants, as well as the closeness he deserves, and feeling guilt over using him and pity for him for being used by so many people.
Really well done.
BJH