Review for Split Mirror

Split Mirror

(#) Thelionwaits 2008-06-26

Very intersting, and exciting, premise. The pantheons have been broughttogether in a totally new way. Kudos for that.
You left the reader hanging, figuring there would be more, I hope you intend to pursue your story further, there is a lot of potential.
My only criticism - there are a few grammatical errors (minor punctuation and word usage, nothing major) you might want to look into for your future endeavors. Otherwise a very interesting read.

Author's response

Thank you for your praise and thank you even more for your criticism. I plan to add more but the story splits three different ways (one to each dimension the female shadow mentioned) and I plan to write each in a different section to try not to completely confuse the reader. I'm sorry I did not mention this in some sort of end note.