I like the hint towards Elle’s coffee addiction. I picked up on that, I think last chapter? When it mentioned her ‘morning coffee’. Coffee is a life source, I swear! Okay that was my random observation…and now….
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES!!!! So I can't be mad at you for having Ryan cheat…He was tired, and confused, and he had after all loved Brendon. (Loved. Loved. Loves Helen…Loved Brendon. GAH! Ryan you SILLY, SILLY, SILLY BOY!!! )
Poor Helen will be so hurt if she finds out . And she was so perfect for him, and she made him see the better side of life, when Brendon had just treated Ryan like total crap and LEFT him to be saved by Helen’s goodness.
Let me tell you, with every question of “Right?” within the story, I was telling my computer screen: “YES! RYAN YES YOU KNOW ITS YES!” right back.
Oh my gosh, that is so SELFISH of Brendon!!!!!! And a bit of Ryan (although I am still chalking his reactions up to lack of sleep, because I might be in a tad bit of denial. Hehehe.).
There was bound to be no good coming from this, but apathy added to these mingling emotions. Clothes were thrown and misplaced upon the floor as well as Ryan's conscience.
This stood out to me. You have a way with words darling!!! You really do!
He didn't realize that this could hurt Helen in a way that Ryan had experienced.
I really like how this relates to what happened last chapter, in that Ryan and Helen’s stories have sort of circled each other. If that makes sense. I hope it does, because it is very striking to me!
I could go on and on about this story, but I suppose I had better stop here.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUT OUT! That is one of the sweetest things EVER!!!!! I love you and your story SO MUCH! Aghhh! Words cannot even describe!
If you look forward to reading my reviews, well let me tell you, I look forward to reading your story!!! And I look forward to review an awesome chapter every time, and you’ve never let me down! Plus it is amazing to know that you read reviews. It definitely inspires me to want to review, plus the amazingness of the story.
Xo,
Lifey!
Ps. Feel free to AIM me, I you like. Birdygirl66
PPS. By the way, i DO Love the word alas too xD but yes, you did a good job this chapter!!! have i said 'amazing' too much yet? XD GAH i freaking love you. haha
Author's response
Ah yes, coffee is a life source. I agree. And it's not a pointless observation at all. I was actually hoping someone would pick up on that. :]
And yes, Ryan was rather tired and confused. Nonetheless, it was very silly for him to cheat, considering he already had perfection in his life. [Helen] This chapter made me rather sad while writing it, actually. Nonetheless, Ryan is just a character, so I shouldn't be too obsessed with it. But, I get so enraveled in my stories, I find myself actually feeling for my characters. Weird. o.0
And I giggled at your answers while reading the questions of 'Right?'. That made me smile. :]
And yes, yes. It does make sense. In the previous chapter, Ryan and Helen's stories have circled together. :]
No need to thank me on the shout-out. You absolutely deserve it. Let me tell you, I get so freaking happy when ever I get a review from you, that I have this dumb smile plastered on my face all day and I start giggling like I'm insane, while clapping. I swear, if anyone saw me, they may think I'm retarded. You give me such long, inspiring reviews that I enjoy so much. You are just so amazing. :]
Thank you for the review as well as all your others. I cannot thank you enough!
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