Well, its cliche as it can be. I do like this kind of fics and all, and this one is the sum of all cliches I've ever saw in them. Just being honest. Anyway, I already said I like this kind of fics, so, keep them comming!
Author's response
Thats kool, anyway I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, the next one will be out in about 2 days. Sorry it cant be on Saturday, I wont be here.
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