Well, Ryan.
You have officially screwed yourself over.
And everything was going so well kiddo.
This chapter blew me away.
I found myself shaking while reading every word, and whispering to myself.
"Don't do it Ryan! Don't.... awh, crap you did."
I felt like to him it seemed justified. Which, KILLED ME! It isn't okay to have sex with Brendon. NO. That is enough to make all the psychiatrists in the world say, "Back to the drawing board." Because you are going behind the back of the one person that means something in your life!
Your writing is amazing. Seriously. I felt like I was Ryan. Which means, I had intercourse with Brendon. Not that I mind that at all.... but it was really cool.
But the thing that highlights your writing the most, the reason it shines above all else, is the details.
Details, details, details.
The coffee, and the rain.
Oh my, the rain. I love it so much now. I can just sit out in the rain when I am sad, because I connect it with stories that make me happy.
I love your writing.
I am making sure you don't procrastinate too badly.
♥ Elle
Author's response
Ah, yes.
Ryan has offically screwed himself over. Poor kid, everything was going perfect for him too. :[
I'm glad you liked the chapter and thought that all my details were good. I usually fear I have too many. =/
Nonetheless, thank you for the review. :]
It made me smile. :D