There are some spelling errors that jar the reader a bit, but the overall chapter is good and engrossing read. I do hope that Harry can get together with his Hermione and then the two of them learn all they can in this new, steam-powered, world before they find a way to return to theirs. I'm sure that, esp. if the trans-worldline portal aloows travel in time, too, they'll come as a very rude shock to their opponents, both Tommy and his boys and Dumbles and his boys, and a new force that finally brings an end to the warfare.